Vostryan armylist
jag har 2 army lists att välja mellan och jag behöver lite kostruktiv kritik om de båda och vilken som är bättre. och klaga inte över hur det är skrivet jag har nämnligen kopierat från excel :P
lista 1
HQ
Command squad
Heroic senior officer 70 p
mastercrafted powerfist 20 p
medallion crimson 15 p
bionics 5 p
refractor field 15 p
3x veterans 18 p
medic 5 p
company standard 5 p
grenade launcher 8 p
mastervox 20 p
doctrines
die hards 5 p
carapace armour 20 p
close orderdrill
iron dicipline 5 p
total 211 p
comissar 1 40 p
powerfist 20 p
carapace 5 p
bionics 5 p
medallion 15 p
crimson
total 85 p
comissar 2 40 p
powersword 5 p
refr.field 15 p
carapace 5 p
bolt pistol 1 p
total 66 p
Anti-tank squad 35 p
3x lascannons 75 p
doctrines
close orderdrill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
total 135 p
fire support 35p
3x heavy bolters 45p
carapace armour 20p
die hard 5p
close order drill
85p
Elites
hardened veterans
1 veteran sergeant 13 p
8x veterans 64 p
3x plasma guns 30 p
1 bolt pistol 1 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
close orderdrill
total 128 p
5x ratlings 55 p
troops
platoon 1
comand squad
jun. Officer 40 p
powersword 5 p
plasmapistol 10 p
refractor field 15 p
1 plasmagun 10 p
1 grenade launcher 8 p
2x meltaguns 10 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
total 148 p
squad 1/1 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/2 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/3 60 p
1x flamer 6 p
heavy bolter 10 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
total 101 p
armoured fist squad 60 p
1 flamer 6 p
1 missile launcher 15 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
chimera 70 p
track guards 10 p
multilaser 10 p
total 196 p
fast attack
Hellhound 115 p
rough terrain 5 p
total 120 p
heavy support
leman russ 140p
hull. Heavy bolter 5p
sponson heavy bolter 10p
total 155p
leman russ demolisher 150 p
hull. lascannon 15 p
track guards 10 p
rough terrain 5 p
total 180 p
basilisk 100 p
rough terrain mod 5 p
inderect fire 25 p
total 130 p
doctrines
iron disipline
die hards
carapace armour
ratlings
close orderdrill
Army points = 1987
lista 1
HQ
Command squad
Heroic senior officer 70 p
mastercrafted powerfist 20 p
medallion crimson 15 p
bionics 5 p
refractor field 15 p
3x veterans 18 p
medic 5 p
company standard 5 p
grenade launcher 8 p
mastervox 20 p
doctrines
die hards 5 p
carapace armour 20 p
close orderdrill
iron dicipline 5 p
total 211 p
comissar 1 40 p
powerfist 20 p
carapace 5 p
bionics 5 p
medallion 15 p
crimson
total 85 p
comissar 2 40 p
powersword 5 p
refr.field 15 p
carapace 5 p
bolt pistol 1 p
total 66 p
Anti-tank squad 35 p
3x lascannons 75 p
doctrines
close orderdrill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
total 135 p
fire support 35p
3x heavy bolters 45p
carapace armour 20p
die hard 5p
close order drill
85p
Elites
hardened veterans
1 veteran sergeant 13 p
8x veterans 64 p
3x plasma guns 30 p
1 bolt pistol 1 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
close orderdrill
total 128 p
5x ratlings 55 p
troops
platoon 1
comand squad
jun. Officer 40 p
powersword 5 p
plasmapistol 10 p
refractor field 15 p
1 plasmagun 10 p
1 grenade launcher 8 p
2x meltaguns 10 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
total 148 p
squad 1/1 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/2 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/3 60 p
1x flamer 6 p
heavy bolter 10 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
total 101 p
armoured fist squad 60 p
1 flamer 6 p
1 missile launcher 15 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
chimera 70 p
track guards 10 p
multilaser 10 p
total 196 p
fast attack
Hellhound 115 p
rough terrain 5 p
total 120 p
heavy support
leman russ 140p
hull. Heavy bolter 5p
sponson heavy bolter 10p
total 155p
leman russ demolisher 150 p
hull. lascannon 15 p
track guards 10 p
rough terrain 5 p
total 180 p
basilisk 100 p
rough terrain mod 5 p
inderect fire 25 p
total 130 p
doctrines
iron disipline
die hards
carapace armour
ratlings
close orderdrill
Army points = 1987
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Kommentarer
HQ
Comand squad
Heroic senior officer 70 p fire support squad 35 p
mastercrafted powerfist 20 p 3x heavy bolters 45 p
medallion crimson 15 p doctrines
bionics 5 p close orderdrill
refractor field 15 p carapace armour 20 p
3x veterans 18 p die hards 5 p
medic 5 p total 95 p
company standard 5 p
grenade launcher 8 p
mastervox 20 p Anti-tank squad 35 p
doctrines 3x lascannons 75 p
die hards 5 p doctrines
carapace armour 20 p close orderdrill
close orderdrill carapace armour 20 p
iron dicipline 5 p die hards 5 p
total 135 p
total 211 p
comissar 1 40 p
powerfist 20 p
carapace 5 p
bionics 5 p
total 70 p
comissar 2 40 p
powersword 5 p
carapace 5 p
bolt pistol 1 p
total 51 p
Elites
hardened veterans
1 veteran sergeant 13 p
8x veterans 64 p
3x plasma guns 30 p
1 bolt pistol 1 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
close orderdrill
total 128 p
troops
platoon 1
comand squad
jun. Officer 40 p
powersword 5 p
plasmapistol 10 p
refractor field 15 p
1 plasmagun 10 p
1 grenade launcher 8 p
2x meltaguns 10 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
total 148 p
squad 1/1 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/2 60p
1xflamer 6p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5p
close orderdrill
91p
squad 1/3 60 p
1x flamer 6 p
heavy bolter 10 p
doctrines
carapace armour 20 p
die hards
close orderdrill
total 91 p
armoured fist squad 60 p
1 flamer 6 p
1 missile launcher 15 p
doctrines
close order drill
carapace armour 20 p
die hards 5 p
chimera 70 p
track guards 10 p
multilaser 10 p
total 196 p
heavy support
leman russ 140 p
hull. Heavy bolter 5 p
sponson heavy bolter 10 p
total 155 p
leman russ demolisher 150 p
hull. lascannon 15 p
track guards 10 p
rough terrain 5 p
total 180 p
basilisk 100 p
rough terrain mod 5 p
inderect fire 25 p
total 130 p
Deamonhunters
inqusitor lord 45 p
artificer armour 15 p
bolt pistol 1 p
psycannon bolts 10 p
anointed power weapon 35 p
total 106 p
vindicare assasin 110 p
doctrines
iron disipline
die hards
carapace armour
close orderdrill
Army points = 1998
Tyvärr så får du antagligen färre kommentarer om du inte gör listan läslig först. Poängsummor för enskilda uppgraderingar är tämligen ointressant och kan gärna lämnas bort. Detsamma gäller ordet "doctrines" som följer med varje enhet.
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